Sunday, June 22, 2008

Poem - You and Me

I am your husband (sorry)
You are my wife (thank you)

I always cared for you,
but took you for granted (sorry)
You've been always with me (thank you)

When I hurt you,
I didn't share your pain (sorry)
You've always wiped my tears (thank you)

Many times I have lied to you (sorry)
Sooner or later you have always confided in me (thank you)

My impatience caused you many problems (sorry)
You somehow dealt with them (thank you)

Sometimes I forgot you (sorry)
Your mind was always filled with me (thank you)

Whenever I shot you with questions (sorry)
You replied calmly, nicely (thank you)

I commit mistakes repeatedly (sorry)
You punish me severely (thank you)

I don't give my 100% (sorry)
You never complain (thank you)

I gave you something (sorry)
You never asked for anything (thank you)

I intensely do one thing
I LOVE YOU



43 comments:

Jazzyjenator said...

nice one !!!

Anonymous said...

dis beautiful poem truly reflects a sensitive & carin side of two soulmates..

gauri jadhav said...

just one thing 2 say "BETTER THAN THE BEST"

Anonymous said...

its d most lovliest poem i hav ever read....frm where do u get all these beautiful thoughts??

Anonymous said...

its d most lovliest poem i hav ever read....frm where do u get all these beautiful thoughts??

Anonymous said...

its d most lovliest poem i hav ever read....frm where do u get all these beautiful thoughts??

roopz said...

Simply Sweet :)

Regards
Village Girl

Harisankar said...

Lovely!!..:)

Unknown said...

Situations and all emotions are described soo nicely😌😌... This must be spreaded as far as we can🤘💖.... Amazing talent Purswani sir👏👏👏👏

Anonymous said...

Beautiful!

Anonymous said...

💜💜lovely

Unknown said...

Awasome👍I really love this poem

Unknown said...

Awasome��I really love this poem

Unknown said...

Beautiful

Anonymous said...

A complete heartfelt poem. That (thankyou) (sorry) are just best.

Anonymous said...

Awesome

Unknown said...

Nice

Unknown said...

Really beautiful

Unknown said...

Good attempt,

Unknown said...

Its beautiful

Dilip said...

Impressive ✌

prof. Manbodh kumar said...

Really nice and heart touching poem expreesd in delight way . It express the hidden love between the couple filled with love and sensitive care. Thanx Amit sir for this

prof. Manbodh kumar said...

Nice and sensitive poem expressing hidden love between couple

Akesh said...

Beautiful 👌👌

Unknown said...

Nice 👏

Unknown said...

Amazing❤👏👏

Pawan said...

Lovely😊

Unknown said...

Beautiful! The emotions are visible in words. Love has no sorry or thank you but if we do understand our mistakes then it automatically says Thank you 😊

Mohit Dhameja said...

Beautiful😊 I really love that Thankyou and Sorry.

Unknown said...

Loved the poem bro !
Keep going...

ManishKataria said...

Very nicely written,feelings expressed with open heart.

jyotimeghwani said...

Wonderful and heartfelt poem..poetic style is unique and adorable 😊

Anonymous said...

Nice wordings 👌💗

Unknown said...

Beautiful 👍👍

Unknown said...

Very nice 💘

Unknown said...

Good one👍

Unknown said...

wow.. loved it! 😍

Devang Somani said...

It's awesome and thing which everyone should follow

sanju said...

Awesome ,Amit bhai, best poem

Anonymous said...

Interesting writing

Siya Meghwani said...

Lovely poem. Nicely written the feelings (life) of couple..

Unknown said...

Lovely!!!! Good one 👌

Unknown said...

Good one!!